yokosan
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I like coffee and always drink coffee in the morning. Today there was no coffee left in my house,so I was a little disappointed, I had no choice but not to drink coffee. Then my husband went out without saying anything suddenly. When I finished preparing for our breakfast, he went back. How wonderful! He bought coffee for me at the convenience store and came back. I was so happy and enjoyed my coffee time. Recently, the coffee at the convenience store is so good, the quality is better and the price is reasonable. After you pay at the cashier, you make a coffee yourself at the coffee machine. When you come to Japan, please try it!
27 ก.พ. 2021 เวลา 7:59
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I like coffee and always drink some in the morning. Today there was no coffee left in my house, so I was a bit disappointed. I had no choice but to skip drinking my morning coffee. Then my husband went out without saying anything. Suddenly, when I finished preparing our breakfast, he came back. How wonderful! He had bought coffee for me at the convenience store. I was so happy and enjoyed my coffee time. Recently, the coffee at the convenience store is become really good and the price is reasonable. Once you pay at the cashier, you make your coffee yourself at the coffee machine. Whenever you have the chance to come to Japan, please try it!
Good.
2 มีนาคม 2021
I like coffee and always drink some in the morning. Today there was no coffee left in my house,so I was a bit disappointed, I had no choice but to skip drinking coffee. Then my husband went out without saying anything. Suddenly, when I finished preparing our breakfast, he went back. How wonderful! He bought coffee for me at the convenience store. I was so happy and enjoyed my coffee time. Recently, the coffee at the convenience store is so good, the quality is good (or better than .. something...) and the price is reasonable. Once you pay at the cashier, you make a coffee yourself at the coffee machine. Whenever you have the chance to come to Japan, please try it!
Your text was already perfect, I just changed a few vocabulary for the fun. But if you do coffee “by yourself “ in the convenient store ... is n it the same as doing it “by yourself” home ? I think your husband is simply good at making coffee ;)
2 มีนาคม 2021
I like coffee and always drink coffee in the morning. Today there was no coffee left in my house,so I was a little disappointed. I had no choice but not to drink coffee. Then my husband suddenly went out without saying anything. He came back when I finished preparing for our breakfast. How wonderful! He bought coffee for me at the convenience store and came back. I was so happy and enjoyed my coffee time. Recently, the coffee at the convenience store is so good, the quality is better and the price is reasonable. After you pay the cashier, you make a coffee yourself at the coffee machine. Whenever you come to Japan, please try it!
🙂. I will try it.
27 กุมภาพันธ์ 2021
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yokosan
ทักษะด้านภาษา
ภาษาจีน (กลาง), ภาษาจีน (กวางตุ้ง), ภาษาอังกฤษ, ภาษาฝรั่งเศส, ภาษาญี่ปุ่น
ภาษาที่เรียน
ภาษาจีน (กลาง), ภาษาจีน (กวางตุ้ง), ภาษาอังกฤษ