“Cueca Chilena” this is typical dance in my country 🇨🇱. It’s very popular that everyone to dance when we’re September 18. We celebrated with our family, we usually go to “FONDA” it’s a typical part

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“Cueca Chilena” this is typical dance in my country 🇨🇱. It’s very popular that everyone to dance when we’re September 18. We celebrated with our family, we usually go to “FONDA” it’s a typical party where there’re different stand that they sell food, handicrafts, drink and others.

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“Cueca Chilena” is a typical dance in my country 🇨🇱. It’s very popular that everyone dances it on September 18. We celebrate with our family, and we usually go to “FONDA”. It’s a typical party, where there are different stalls that sell food, handicrafts, drinks, and more.

I changed some tenses for uniformity, and added some punctuation. I think stands is understandable also. You can use either “stall” or “stand” for the place where vendors sell their wares. You can also use “vendors”

9 พฤศจิกายน 2020

The "Cueca Chilena” is a typical dance in my country 🇨🇱. It’s so popular that entire country dances it on September 18th. We celebrate it with our family and usually go to the “FONDA”, which is a typical party along with various stands selling food, handcrafts, drinks, and so on.

9 พฤศจิกายน 2020

“Cueca Chilena” is a typical/ traditional dance in my country 🇨🇱. It’s so popular that everyone dances to it (or does it) on September 18. We celebrate with our families. We usually go to a “FONDA”, which is a typical party, where there are different stands/ stalls that sell food, handicrafts, drinks and more.

9 พฤศจิกายน 2020

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