Hello everyone, I want to turn it into an Advanced English text. Please, professional teachers or native, help me as soon as possible !!! ✨👇🏻‼️ "I am Helen, last Summer holidays, I went with my family to Paris. We went by car. There was me, my parents, my brother Tom and my little sister Susan. We live in Brighton and we are English. We saw the most interesting places in Paris, as the Eiffel Tower, the Louvre Museum and we made the city tour. I loved it, because Paris is a very beautiful city. On the fifth day we went to Euro Disney. That was fantastic. We all enjoyed ourselves a lot. We stayed in Euro Disney four days. They were the most exciting days I had all my life. We were all very tired because we had to walk a lot to watch everything and enjoy all the amusements. My sister is only 4 years old and she loved it. I met all the Disney characters and they were very funny. We stayed at a hotel inside Euro Disney."