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124_2110 Could you help me correct the following text ?
【Randoseru / Japanese School Bag】
“Randoseru” is a mandatory bag for children in elementary school. We usually spend with this bag for six years. Therefore, it is a very precious gift for children and a symbolic one. When l was a child, they had only two colors; red and black. However these days, they have many colors; pink, blue, brown, purple, and so on. It’s an incredible thing for me. I think that reflects respecting to children’s individuality and gender free.
I’m sure that our school style with Randoseru will continue in 10 years in Japan.
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23 ต.ค. 2021 เวลา 23:32
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124_2110 Could you help me correct the following text ?
【Randoseru / Japanese School Bag】
“Randoseru” is a mandatory bag for children in elementary school. We usually keep this bag for six years. Therefore, it is a very precious gift for children and a symbolic one. When l was a child, they had only two colors; red and black. However these days, they have many colors; pink, blue, brown, purple, and so on. It’s an incredible thing for me. I think this reflects the child’s individuality and gender choice.
I’m sure that our school style with Randoseru will continue for another 10 years in Japan.
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24 ตุลาคม 2021
124_2110 Could you help me correct the following text ? 【Randoseru / Japanese
School Bag】 “Randoseru” is a mandatory bag for children in elementary school. We
usually have/keep this bag for six years. Therefore, it is a very precious gift
for children and a symbolic one. When l was a child they had only two colors;
red and black. However, these days they have many colors; pink, blue, brown,
purple, and so on. I think it’s an incredible thing. I think that it’s a way of respecting children’s individuality and it is gender neutral. I’m sure that our school style with the Randoseru will continue in 10 years in Japan.
Photo by SEIBAN
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23 ตุลาคม 2021
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