My mother promised me that she would take me back to my hometown. I haven’t been there in ages. I was afraid of a retarded man I met there years ago. He didn’t do anything, just played with leaves. I

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Isabella

My mother promised me that she would take me back to my hometown. I haven’t been there in ages. I was afraid of a retarded man I met there years ago. He didn’t do anything, just played with leaves. I was little kid then, I feel sorry for him now. My relatives all live in my hometown and I missed them a lot. I am so looking forward to see my relatives.

23 Thg 04 2022 15:12

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My mother promised me she would take me back to my hometown. I haven’t been there in ages. I was afraid of a retarded man I met there years ago. He didn’t do anything, just played with leaves. I was a little kid then, but I feel sorry for him now. My relatives all live in my hometown and I miss them a lot. I am so looking forward to seeing my relatives.

你好 Isabella. Well done. Possibly you will have different feelings going back there now that you are older. Good luck!

23 tháng 4 năm 2022

My mother promised me that she would take me back to my hometown. I haven’t been there in ages. I was afraid of a retarded man I met there years ago. He didn’t do anything, just played with leaves. I was little kid then, I feel sorry for him now. My relatives all live in my hometown and I miss them a lot. I am so looking forward to see my relatives.

Just about perfect. Well done. The only reason I changed 'missed' to 'miss' is that I assume you miss them all the time.

23 tháng 4 năm 2022

My mother promised me that she would take me back to my hometown. I haven’t been there in ages. I was afraid of a mentally disabled man I met there years ago. He didn’t do anything, just played with leaves. I was a little kid then. I feel sorry for him now. My relatives all live in my hometown and I miss them a lot. I am so looking forward to seeing my relatives.

Very well written. My only note is that it is no longer considered respectful to refer to someone with a mental or intellectual disability as "retarded", so I would advise you to avoid using that word. Use "mentally disabled" or "intellectually disabled". Or if the person has a specific condition such as Down's Syndrome, then you could say "a man with Down's syndrome".

23 tháng 4 năm 2022

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