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Taichi
The school has just begun. I miss summer vacation. I had a good time at the time. I went many places. First I went Yamanashi prefecture. My friends house is in Yamanashi. We went by the car. Driving was so fun for us. The temperature was cooler than Tokyo. So I was very happy. I hate hot weather. Second I went watching the baseball game 8 times. It was so exciting. My favorite team could have won many times. I love my team so no baseball no life. Third I went Okinawa with my friends for 4 days. The sea was very clear. I want to go there again.

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Taichiさんへ。投稿にネイティブの添削コメントが全然ついていませんが、それは投稿の際に「post」を選んでいるためです。ぜひ「exercise」を選んで投稿してみてください。こうすると、ネイティブが画面上で添削しやすくなります(コメント欄に元の投稿が表示されて、削除や修正などのプロセスが見えるようになる)。ぜひ今日から試してみてください!!  Enjoy♪

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