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Abdullah B
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In recent times. Online purchases and e-commerce becoming more and more common. The majority of people have done order online once or twice or moreover in the last two years. Humanity learned to accept the new type of shopping within the COVID-19 pandemic. In this essay, ill try to consider the advantage and disadvantages of Online purchases and offer my opinion.
Let's begin by looking at the advantages, One of the main pros of online shopping it made life easier for the sellers and the buyers, both of them got the ability to sell or buy from their home, no need to shop or even shopping basket, the clients buy and pay while lying on their bed, and the merchants receive their money while sleeping, the stores are opened 24/7 and the orders delivered to any place on the earth.
Another great advantage, it's cheaper for the sellers no need for a store to show the products, no requirement for employees to open and close the store or to guide the buyers for their convenient goods or sizes. Further, the customers will get a cheaper price because a lot of bills fall off of the seller's shoulders, also they got easy access to compare the price from tons of websites and hunt the suitable one for themselves.
Turning to the other side of e-commerce, many people may get a scam via fake websites acting like a well-known brand or by offering tremendous deals which are not easy to ignore or even by some hack and various tracking their credit cards.
Secondly, some countries still don't have a clear regulation for e-commerce which led to more scams and some seller fabricating by putting a different picture for the goods deceiving the eyes of shoppers.
All things considered, online shopping is a new market that got a massive push by the COVID-19, some governments weren't ready to deal with it, and people have to learn about it for healthy shopping. Personally, in my opinion, I hate the typical shopping and I enjoy the online one and believe it's the future.
15 Thg 06 2021 11:05
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7/60
In recent times. Online purchases and e-commerce becoming more and more common. The majority of people have done order online once or twice or moreover in the last two years. Humanity learned to accept the new type of shopping within the COVID-19 pandemic. In this essay, ill try to consider the advantage and disadvantages of Online purchases and offer my opinion.
Let's begin by looking at the advantages, One of the main pros of online shopping it made life easier for the sellers and the buyers, both of them got the ability to sell or buy from their home, no need to shop or even shopping basket, the clients buy and pay while lying on their bed, and the merchants receive their money while sleeping, the stores are opened 24/7 and the orders delivered to any place on the earth.
Another great advantage, it's cheaper for the sellers no need for a store to show the products, no requirement for employees to open and close the store or to guide the buyers for their convenient goods or sizes. Further, the customers will get a cheaper price because a lot of bills fall off of the seller's shoulders, also they got easy access to compare the price from tons of websites and hunt the suitable one for themselves.
Turning to the other side of e-commerce, many people may get a scam via fake websites acting like a well-known brand or by offering tremendous deals which are not easy to ignore or even by some hack and various tracking their credit cards.
Secondly, some countries still don't have a clear regulation for e-commerce which led to more scams and some seller fabricating by putting a different picture for the goods deceiving the eyes of shoppers.
All things considered, online shopping is a new market that got a massive push by the COVID-19, some governments weren't ready to deal with it, and people have to learn about it for healthy shopping. Personally, in my opinion, I hate the typical shopping and I enjoy the online one and believe it's the future.
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15 tháng 6 năm 2021
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Tiếng Ả Rập, Tiếng Ả Rập (Vùng Vịnh), Tiếng Ả Rập (Chuẩn hiện đại), Tiếng Anh, Tiếng Malay
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