Jessie💞Isabella
I have been working all week. Now it’s time for me to rest this evening. I find that eating in the cafeteria is quite relaxing for me. So I went there and ate boiled Congee with meat and lettuce, fried rice noodles and red bean soup for dinner. After I got back home, I did laundry and picked up things. Then, I tutored my daughter to do a picture description in Chinese. She searched online and chose to write a description about the painting, Mona Lisa. She looked at the painting carefully and wrote about something I hadn’t (or-haven’t) never noticed before, for instance, Mona Lisa in the painting doesn’t have eyebrows!
18 Thg 06 2021 15:33
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I find that eating in the cafeteria is quite relaxing for me. Hi Jessie and Isabella, I agree with the corrections my colleagues have already suggested. Just want to put my two cents in. I would rather say, 'I find eating in the cafeteria quite relaxing'. It sounds more fluent to me. Hope this helps. Warm greetings, Anna
19 tháng 6 năm 2021
I have been working all week and now it’s time for me to rest this evening. I find that eating in the cafeteria is quite relaxing. So I went there and ate boiled Congee with meat and lettuce, fried rice noodles and red bean soup for dinner. After I got back home, I did the laundry and tidied up. Then, I tutored my daughter to write a picture description in Chinese. She searched online and chose to write a description about the painting, Mona Lisa. She looked at the painting carefully and wrote about something I hadn’t ever noticed before, for instance, Mona Lisa in the painting doesn’t have eyebrows!
18 tháng 6 năm 2021
I have been working all week. Now it’s time for me to rest this evening. I find that eating in the cafeteria is quite relaxing for me. So I went there and ate boiled Congee with meat and lettuce, fried rice noodles and red bean soup for dinner. After I got back home, I did laundry and cleaned up things. Then, I tutored my daughter to write a picture description in Chinese. She searched online and chose to write a description about the painting, Mona Lisa. She looked at the painting carefully and wrote about something I had never noticed before; Mona Lisa doesn’t have eyebrows!
18 tháng 6 năm 2021
This was really good, the only issue is, after hadn't, you don't need to put the word "never". You can't say hadn't noticed.
18 tháng 6 năm 2021
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