Many countries around the world are struggling to address environmental challenges. One of them is pollution, which is significantly jeopardizing humans' life quality. In big cities, for instance, air pollution has contributed to an increasing number of people suffering lung-related diseases. On the other hand, polluted rivers in poor countries have not only created a more serious health problem for residents who live adjacently but also made a country image hideous.
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Many countries around the world are struggling to address environmental challenges. One of these challenges is pollution, which significantly \ jeopardizes the quality of life for humans. In big cities, for instance, air pollution has contributed to an increasing number of people suffering lung-related diseases. Furthermore, polluted rivers in poor countries have not only created a more serious health problem for residents who live adjacently but also made a country image hideous.
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I would say "concerning" the global environmental problems we are facing
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Many countries around the world are struggling to address environmental
challenges. One of them is pollution, which is significantly jeopardizing
humans' life quality. In big cities, for instance, air pollution has contributed
to an increasing number of people suffering lung-related diseases. On the other
hand, polluted rivers in poor countries have not only created a more serious
health problem for residents who live adjacently but also made a country image
hideous. *** Any professional correction would be highly appreciated***
I think you got several good suggestions but I’d like to add that In the last sentence instead of saying “but also made a country image hideous”, I suggest something like this: “but this also creates the image that this is an undesirable place to live.”
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