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(part 1)Job sharing is a type of part-time employment in which one position can be shared by two part-time workers; that is, the two people share the work, hours, and pay of one job. Job sharing opens more opportunities to people who have other responsibilities, such as taking care of their children or studying, and who need flexible working hours. Do you agree or disagree that job sharing is good for workers? Why? Life today is full of uncertainty, and it is very important that we have flexible working time to deal with those unpredictabilities. In my opinion, many people can benefit from a new type of employment called job sharing, which means two individuals share work tasks, hours and earnings for the same position. I feel this way for two main reasons, and I will explore it in the following paragraphs. First of all, job sharing enable those people, who otherwise can't get any job, to go to work. Regular jobs require employees to work for a fixed spam of time, which could be a big challenge for people who have to take more time to look after their babies but also need to earn some money. However, if two mothers take on a part-time job together, they can collaborate with each other on time and workload sharing. One mom may take care of more assignments at one time when her partner has a more demanding child, and accordingly she gets more payment than the other in return. Therefore, both of them can get some wages to improve their lives. For this reason, I believe many will get more work opportunities if they can share a job with another.( to be continued)
18 Thg 09 2022 13:17
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(part 1)Job sharing is a type of part-time employment in which one position can be shared by two part-time workers; that is, the two people share the work, hours, and pay of one job. Job sharing opens more opportunities to people who have other responsibilities, such as taking care of their children or studying, and who need flexible working hours. Do you agree or disagree that job sharing is good for workers? Why? (This is a long question!) Life today is full of uncertainty, and it is very important that we have flexible working hours to deal with those unpredictabilities. In my opinion, many people can benefit from a new type of employment called job sharing, which means two individuals share work tasks, hours and earnings for the same position. I feel this way for two main reasons and I will explore them in the following paragraphs. First of all, job sharing enables those people, who otherwise couldn’t get any job, to go to work. Regular jobs require employees to work for a fixed span of time, which could be a big challenge for people who have to take more time to look after their babies but also need to earn some money. However, if two mothers take on a full-time job together, they can collaborate with each other on time and workload sharing. One mom may take care of more assignments at those times when her job-sharer has more demands from her child, and accordingly she would earn more than the other in return. Therefore, both of them can get some wages to improve their lives. For this reason, I believe many will get more work opportunities if they can share a job with another.( to be continued)
18 tháng 9 năm 2022
(part 1)Job sharing is a type of part-time employment in which one position can be shared by two part-time workers; that is, the two people share the work, hours, and pay of one job. Job sharing opens more opportunities to people who have other responsibilities, such as taking care of their children or studying, and who need flexible working hours. Do you agree or disagree that job sharing is good for workers? Why? Life today is full of uncertainty, and it is very important that we have the flexibility to deal with these unpredictabilities. In my opinion, many people can benefit from a new type of employment called job sharing, which refers to two individuals who share work tasks, hours and earnings for the same position. I feel this way for two main reasons, and I will explore them in the following paragraphs. First of all, job sharing enable those people, who otherwise can't get any job, to work. Regular jobs require employees to work for a fixed span of time, which could be a big challenge for people who have to take time off to look after their babies but also need to earn some money. However, if two mothers take on a part-time job together, they can collaborate with each other on time and sharing the workload. One mom may take care of more assignments at one time when her partner has a more demanding child, and accordingly she gets more payment than the other in return. Therefore, both of them can get some wages to improve their lives. For this reason, I believe many will get more work opportunities if they can share a job with another.( to be continued)
Excellent job. I remember correcting your writing in the past and I've noticed that you're writing has really improved! One last comment regarding content. When you say, "accordingly she gets more payment than the other in return . . ." I would elaborate on this point on how the arrangement is mutually beneficial for both mothers. Currently, the pay and the workload may benefit one mother economically, allowing the other mother time to take care of her child. But how does this other mother make up the difference? Are you assuming that both parties in this arrangement are both 1) fairly compensated for their time, 2) have the time and space to work a flexible schedule, and 3) can easily make up lost wages because it is likely that the other mother will encounter a similar situation that will place demands on their time? Is that part of the agreement that was discussed? Hope this helps and keep writing!
18 tháng 9 năm 2022
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