Your writing is clear and easy to understand, and you did a good job explaining how music helps you learn English. To improve, try focusing on verb forms (listen/listening/listened), prepositions (listen to), and sentence structure when combining ideas. What are three English music groups that you like? I may have some recommendations. I have studied English for four months. To help me study English, I recently started listening to English music. Although I had never really listened to English music before I started studying English, after I began listening, I started to like it very much. Now, whenever I do something, I listen to it.

I have studied English for 4 months. To study English, I recently started listening to English music. Though I had never really listened to English music until I started studying English, after listening, I began to like it very much . Now whenever I do something to do, I’m listening it. There are some parts of your text that I could not quite understand, so just added a couple grammatical corrections. Here's how I would rewrite it: I have been studying English for 4 months now. As part of my studies, I recently started listening to English music. Even though I had never really listened to English music before, I have come to like it very much. Now, whenever I am doing something, I listen to it.

A more concise way to say this could also be: I have been studying English for four months. To study, I have started listening to music in English. It’s my first listening to music in English and I enjoy it a lot. I like to listen while doing other things.

こんにちは😃私はケリーです！始めまして！ 日本語を三年ぐらい自分で勉強しています。 ラングエージ・パートナーを探しています。 私に日本語を手伝ってもらいませんか？そして、あなたも英語を手伝ってあげます。 私のiTalkiのポーストを読めれば、嬉しいになりますよ！(上の段落があのポーストからコピーパスしました🙂) よろしくお願いします！