Ellie
Day 3/7 JK uniforms in China I have a friend, Sunny, who often wears JK uniforms that are inspired by Japanese high school uniforms. And that is the reason why I got to know more about them. A set of JK uniform includes a cute plaid skirt, usually with a high waist, as well as a shirt or T-shirt with a bow tie matching the skirt. All I can see in her wardrobe are a lot of sets of JK uniforms and nothing else. These uniforms are always in different colors and plaid patterns which is hard for me to recognize the difference between these patterns. Plus, each of them has a special and beautiful name that is relevant to their colors and styles. Many of these JK uniforms are very rare and thus, popular with their targeted consumers. Sometimes she needs us to help her to do the clothes grab ( rush to buy the clothes because there are too few of them) on Taobao, which is a big E-commerce platform in China. Basically, we could hardly see many girls wearing the uniform. Instead, they're more commonly seen in comics and animes. And Sunny told me that when she started becoming interested in wearing JK uniforms 4 years ago, there were even fewer girls wearing them. Therefore, every time when she went out, she could feel that there were many people staring at her curiously and surprisedly. However, now it is more popular for girls to wear JK uniform as a casual daily outfit, especially in Spring when people hang out more often. As for Sunny, she is a very indoorsy person who often stays at home and sets her own sleep schedule. And she is a big fan of Japanese animation which is also the reason why she is so interested in JK uniforms. Apart from that, she is a quite smart and decisive person who can always figure out and stick to her own decisions. Thanks in advance for reading and your correction!
14 Thg 07 2021 17:11
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Day 3/7 JK uniforms in China I have a friend, Sunny, who often wears JK uniforms that are inspired by Japanese high school uniforms. And that is the reason why I got to know more about them. A set of JK uniforms includes a cute plaid skirt, usually with a high waist, as well as a shirt or T-shirt with a bow tie matching the skirt. All I can see in her wardrobe are lots of sets of JK uniforms and nothing else. These uniforms are always in different colors with plaid patterns which are hard for me to recognize the difference of between the patterns. Plus, each of them has a special and beautiful name that is relevant to their colors and styles. Many of these JK uniforms are very rare and thus, popular with their targeted consumers. Sometimes she needs us to help her to do the clothes grab (rush to buy the clothes because there are too few of them) on Taobao, which is a big E-commerce platform in China. You can hardly see many girls wearing these uniforms. Instead, they're more commonly seen in comics and anime. And Sunny told me that when she started becoming interested in wearing JK uniforms 4 years ago, there were even fewer girls wearing them. Therefore, every time when she went out, she could feel that there were many people staring at her curiously and surprisedly. However, now it is more popular for girls to wear JK uniforms as a casual daily outfit, especially in spring when people hang out more often. As for Sunny, she is a very indoorsy person who often stays at home and sets her own sleep schedule. She is a big fan of Japanese animation which is also the reason why she is so interested in JK uniforms. Apart from that, she is a quite smart and decisive person who can always figure out and stick to her own decisions. Thanks in advance for reading and your correction!
Woah, good work Grace. You used a variety of words to connect your ideas together, and that's great, but it isn't so common in English to start sentences with "And". Having said that, there was only one place where I thought it best to leave it out. Besides that, maybe have a think about paragraphs next time you write. Sentences about one thing can be grouped together and then clearly separated from the other paragraphs. Sentences within one paragraph continue on from the last, without needing to start a new line.
14 tháng 7 năm 2021
Day 3/7 JK uniforms in China I have a friend, Sunny, who often wears JK uniforms that are inspired by Japanese high school uniforms. And that is the reason why I got to know more about them. A set of JK uniform includes a cute plaid skirt, usually with a high waist, as well as a shirt or T-shirt with a bow tie matching the skirt. All I can see in her wardrobe are a lots of set of JK uniforms and nothing else. These uniforms are always in different colors and plaid patterns which is hard for me to recognize the difference between these patterns. Plus, each of them has a special and beautiful name that is relevant to their colors and styles. Many of these JK uniforms are very rare and thus, popular with their targeted consumers. Sometimes she needs us to help her to do the clothes grab ( rush to buy the clothes because there are too few of them) on Taobao, which is a big E-commerce platform in China. Basically, we could hardly see many girls wearing the uniform. Instead, they're more commonly seen in comics and animes. And Sunny told me that when she started becoming interested in wearing JK uniforms 4 years ago, there were even fewer girls wearing them. Therefore, every time when she went out, she could feel that there were many people staring at her curiously and surprisedly. However, now it is more popular for girls to wear JK uniform as a casual daily outfit, especially in Spring when people hang out more often. As for Sunny, she is a very indoorsy person who often stays at home and sets her own sleep schedule. And she is a big fan of Japanese animation which is also the reason why she is so interested in JK uniforms. Apart from that, she is a quite smart and decisive person who can always figure out and stick to her own decisions. Thanks in advance for reading and your correction!
14 tháng 7 năm 2021
Day 3/7 JK uniforms in China I have a friend, Sunny, who often wears JK uniforms that are inspired by Japanese high school uniforms. And that is the reason why I got to know more about them. A set of JK uniform includes a cute plaid skirt, usually with a high waist, as well as a shirt or T-shirt with a bow tie matching the skirt. All I can see in her wardrobe are a lot of sets of JK uniforms and nothing else. These uniforms are always in different colors and plaid patterns, it is hard for me to recognize the difference between these patterns. Plus, each of them has a special and beautiful name that is relevant to their colors and styles. Many of these JK uniforms are very rare and thus, popular with their targeted consumers. Sometimes she needs us to help her to do the clothes grab ( rush to buy the clothes because there are too few of them) on Taobao, which is a big E-commerce platform in China. Basically, we can hardly see any girls wearing these uniforms. Instead, they're more commonly seen in comics and animes. And Sunny told me that when she started becoming interested in wearing JK uniforms 4 years ago, there were even fewer girls wearing them. Therefore, every time when she went out, she could feel that there were many people staring at her with curiousity and surprise. However, now it is more popular for girls to wear JK uniform as a casual daily outfit, especially in spring when people hang out more often. As for Sunny, she is a very indoorsy person who often stays at home and sets her own sleep schedule. And she is a big fan of Japanese animation which is also the reason why she is so interested in JK uniforms. Apart from that, she is a quite smart and decisive person who can always figure out and stick to her own decisions. Thanks in advance for reading and your correction!
Well done very good. All students in China hate their uniforms! I saw a few girls wearing this type.
14 tháng 7 năm 2021
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