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Shamsul Alam
I have several desires that I want to achieve in 2022. Becoming fluent in English is the most important and priorities goal. However, I have been learning English since I was in class one, but the fact is that I was learning English just for my school exam, not as a language. Moreover, that was a lack of awareness or guidelines that I had not had to get. To obtain English fluency, On 1st January in 2022, I have been practicing for the IELTS exam since I wanted to immigrate to another country; consequently, I have felt much more confident than before. Additionally, I am gradually increasing my level of English. On the other hand, another desire to achieve this year is to learn drawing, which I found very interesting. Furthermore, I want to learn drawing because I want to surprise my best friend with her portrait picture on a piece of paper, which I want to draw. I know this is crazy, but making someone happy with your challenging work is stunning.
19 Thg 03 2022 17:16
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I have several goals that I want to achieve in 2022. Becoming fluent in English is the most important goal and is my top priority. Although I have been learning English since I was in class one, the fact is that I was learning English just for my school exam, not as a language. I lacked awareness or guidelines. Since 1st January 2022, I have been practicing for the IELTS exam as I want to emigrate to another country; consequently, I feel much more confident than before and am gradually increasing my level of English. On the other hand, another objective for this year is to learn drawing, which I find very interesting. Furthermore, I want to learn drawing because I want to surprise my best friend with her portrait on a piece of paper, which I want to draw. I know this is crazy, but making someone happy with your challenging work is awesome.
Well done. Have you heard the phrase that you can have too much of a good thing? That's true for linking words (discourse markers) too! Less is more ☺️ Also a desire is a wish/hope, so it's not something you can achieve. Use goal/objective, or even dream, instead.
19 tháng 3 năm 2022
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