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We are living at beautiful place called Earth. It is not well now due to many reasons. We, Human are only responsible for it. Increasing in temperature, Corona. - We have been cutting the trees since decades where we see thenimpacts now in temperature. - People eat living inspects. They have also right to live. - We have changed life cycle of Nature. It is already written that which living things eat will which things. For an example big birds eat small and small birds eat inspects. Now, humans are killing birds or small animals and humans are using presiside to kill inspects which is impacting humans.

8 Thg 05 2021 03:55

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We reside on Earth which is fascinating. Currently, the situation is reluctant due to several reasons. Like increasing in temperature and Coronavirus. Humans are only responsible for it. For decades due to the excessive cutting of trees have now an impact on temperature. People eat the meat of living creatures. They too have the right to survive. We have changed the life cycle of Nature. The food chain plays a vital role in conserving the environment. For example, an eagle had snakes, a snake had a frog, a frog had insects and so on. Now, humans kill insects which influence their life themselves.

Hey! Try to compress your writing . Instead of repeating the word "insect" use pronouns which builds an impact on the reader. Never say big bird eat a small one however you can add something better like telling the entire food chain. Even though you are not aware of those things then avoid referring them. Keep going:)

2 tháng 6 năm 2021

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