First notebook entry: Introducing myself

The first reason as to why I am learning English is to improve my spoken English.
Second, of all, I am preparing for the TOEFL test.
And The third is, I want to learn the pronunciations and idioms. (Yes, "pronounciation" is a misspelling - I'm very surprised no-one else noticed.)

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

The first reason why I am learning English is to improve my spoken English fluency.
Secondly of all, I am preparing for the TOEFL test.
And Thirdly, I want to learn correct pronounciations and idioms.

*Note: Never start a sentence with "And".

몬켈리씨, 영어 잘 하시네요!

Blue - better flow of sentence Red - corrections Errors

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

The first reason Wwhy I am learning English is to improve my spoken English.
Second of all, I am currently preparing for the TOEFL test.
And thirdly, I want to learn accurate pronounciations and idioms.

I think your level of written English is very good. ^^