First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, my name is Amor. I am from China. I live in Shanghai and I am a cute girl. I love reading and keeping quiet. I am working as an import & export document clerk.

I love English. Although I have learnt lots of grammar my oral is poor. I want to improve it, especially my pronunciation. Sometimes I can't express myself exactly in English.

I am looking for a teacher who can teach me, or maybe a language exchange partner, either would be ok.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi. My name is Amor. I am from China and I live in Shanghai. I am a cute girl. 
I love reading and keeping quiet (not sure what you want to say??). Currently I am working as an import/export clerk.
I love English but athough I have learned a lot of grammar, I need to improve my speaking ability, especially my prounciation. Sometimes I can't express myself the way I would like to in English.
I am looking for a teacher who can teach me, or maybe a language exchange partner. Either would be ok.