سلام امیر

It's a pleasure to read your introduction and its very well written.  I made a few small corrections below.  One thing to clarify for you is the difference between 'best' and 'favorite': 

Best means 'the most excellent'.  In Farsi, بهترترین

Favorite means the one you like or enjoy the most. (Is it محبوب  in Farsi?)

In what you've written below  'favorite' is the 'best' word to use. 

Very warm welcome to my page EveryBody!

Hello Everyone!
First of all Before anything else,let me thank you as you have took trouble and come to read my page!
Well,I'm Amir and from Iran.I live in an ancient city in Iran where has many historical houses,ancient places,very different and old culture....
I go to those places and take photos photo as a hobby,but to be honest my favorite best hobby is learning and speaking English so i use that hobby for improving my favorite best hobby! :)
I mean i've got so much too many information about historical places,ancient sites,.....and cultural stuff of Iran so i could share them with others in English,so i could do my favorite best hobby!
I really appreciate any help from of you,even your hello gives me a pleasure!
I feel talkative now so i let you go now and i'm looking forward to hear from you!
Thanks for being patient and reading my page
Warm regards
Amir

Very warm welcome to my page EveryBody!

Hello Everyone!
Before anything else,let me thank you as you have took trouble and for taking the time to come to and read my page!
Well,I'm  my name is Amir and I come from Iran.I live in an ancient city in Iran where has there are many historical houses  and ancient places. It is a very different and old culture....
I go to those places and take photos as a hobby,but to be honest,  my best favorite hobby is learning and speaking English. so i I am trying to use that hobby the photography for improving to improve my English best hobby ! :)
I mean i've got too many I have a lot of information about historical places and ancient sites,.....and plus  cultural stuff of from Iran so i that I could would like to share them with others in English,so that I i could do practice my best favorite hobby!
I would really appreciate any help. of you,even your hello gives me a pleasure! I would enjoy it even if you just said hello!
I feel talkative now but  so i I will let you go now and i'm I'm looking forward to hearing from you!
Thanks for being patient and reading my page
Warm regards
Amir

What a very nice introduction! In English, we always capitalize I, no matter where it appears in the sentene. I was able to understand what you said very well and just gave you some fine-tuning above. 

Good luck!

Love your entry Amir! 

Very warm welcome to everyone who visits my page!

Hello Everyone!
First of all, I would like to thank you for taking the time to stop by and read my page!
My name is Amir and I am from Iran. I live in an ancient Iranian city where there are many historical houses and ancient places. The city has a very different and old culture.
As a hobby, I go to those places to take photos but to be honest my favorite hobby is to learn and speak English; I use my photography hobby to improve my favorite hobby! :) 
I have so much information about the culture there and those historical sites, I share that information with others in English and then am able to engage in my favorite hobby!
I really appreciate anyone's help; even your hello gives is pleasant!
I feel like maybe I have talked too much so I will let you go but I am looking forward to hearing from you!
Thanks for your patience and for reading my page!
Warm regards,
Amir