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Internship is very important part of our education at the university, because everybody can try out their theoretical knowledge in real life
I waited very long, this time, because I knew that I could get much more information about my future profession. (This sentence doesn`t seem natural, and it is a bit difficult to understand.)
Today I started my internship. I met some new people, who work there, and they shared their experiences with me. I read legal paragraphs and other important documents. I read these documents (them) before lunch. After lunch I made a list of directors from different organizations with their numbers and emails. After it I called everybody and informed them about an event, which will be very soon.
Of course, it is only my first day of my internship, but I am really happy that I chose the correct profession!
Hi Alexey. Good work I tried not to rewrite your sentences too much, so that they would still be yours.
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