A frost on North
It is frosty today, about -30 degress.
In the morning I stayed next to the window and watched on the cold city.
All people wear really warmy. They put on felt boots, fur coats, mittens and cover their faces with scarfs.
I saw a woman in sport suit, but she look like so strange! I thought maybe is she from another place?
There are few cars in the streets. Some people can't turn on an eingine of their cars. From cars and faces of frozen people wreathes the cold air. People hurry to nedeed spots - to work or to the kindergarten. Few children go to school because junior class children must leave home.
They are really happy today.
When I went out today I felled a picking in my checks. I breathed a cold air and smiled. I like this fresh braising air. I went quite fastly and run in the cafe and take away one cur of coffee. I enjoy smelling an aroma of fresh coffee.
When I went from a corner the hard wind began to blow to me. I thought that people in North Pole feel like I feel in this moment)
My face had burned thro cold wind and my eyes can't see. But it was not for long soon I feel better.
I went to my work and thought why is wonderful my city Surgut. There are clean streets without snow through we have a lot of snow in the winter. There are polite drivers which always give way to pedestrians.
I smiled and feeled happy.
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A Frost in the North
It is frosty today, about -30 degrees Celcius.In the morning I stayed next to the window and looked out onto the cold city.
Everyone was wrapped up warm. They put on felt boots, fur coats, mittens and covered their faces with scarves.
I saw a woman in a sports suit, but she looked like so strange! I thought maybe is she from another place?
There are a few cars in the streets. Some people can't turn on the engines. From the cars and faces of frozen people comes warm air.* People hurry to their destinations - to work or to kindergarten. Few children go to school because junior class children must stay(?) home.
They are really happy today.
When I went out today I felt a picking in my checks. I breathed the cold air and smiled. I like this fresh bracing air. I went quite fast and ran into the cafe and took away one cup of coffee. I enjoy smelling the aroma of fresh coffee.
When I went round a corner the hard wind began to blow. I thought that people in the North Pole feel like I feel in that moment)
My face had burned through cold winds and my eyes could not see. But it was not for long and soon I felt better.
I went to work and thought how wonderful my city is. There are clean streets without snow although we have a lot of snow in the winter. There are polite drivers who always give way to pedestrians.
I smiled and felt happy.
*or, the cars and faces breathe the cold air?
Very well written!
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A frost in the North
It is frosty today, the temperate is about -30 degrees. In the morning I stayed next to the window and watched over the cold city. All people were well dressed for the cold. They put on felt boots, fur coats, mittens and cover their faces with scarfs.I saw a woman in sports suit, but she looked so strange! I thought maybe is she from another place?
There are few cars in the streets. Some people can't turn on an engine of their cars. You can see the breath from the faces of frozen people as well as the exhausts from cars.. People hurry to their destinations. - to work or to the kindergarten. Few children go to school because junior class children must stay at home.
They are really happy today.
When I went out today I felled a pinch on my checks. I breathed the cold air and smiled. I like this fresh bracing air. I went quite quickly and run into the cafe and take away one cup of coffee. I enjoy smelling the aroma of fresh coffee.
When I went round a corner the strong wind caught me. I thought that people in North Pole feel like I feel at this moment.
My face had burned through the cold air and the wind and my eyes can't see. But it was not for long. Soon I feel better.
I went to my work and thought this is why my city Surgut is wonderful. There are clean streets without snow through we have a lot of snow in the winter. There are polite drivers who always give way to pedestrians.
I smiled and feel happy.
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