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In our city we are always surrounded by white trash,Especially after a huge party.We can see the plastic bags and bottles in every corners,Myebe this is called plastic pollution .Exception,In our city the garbage sorting and recicly are not good.there are another phenomenon that more and more people like to eat wild taste which lead to many poachings to kill many species animals,All of those may cause the breed less of the animals .Under this circumstance. As one of the members on the earth.We should take the reasonablitity to change those.Firstly.We should improve our awareness to reduce the use of plastic and do better on trash sorting.At the same time.Our city should enhance the punishment of those people who excessive the cut of the trees.Of course we should change our views to keep our environment ecosystem and creative a green world.Gardening should be encouraged.Green planting vegetable such as broccolis eggplants lettuces and so on is much important to protection our environment.In a word. we all have duty to cherish our nature.
28 Thg 07 2022 14:11
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In my city, we are always surrounded by trash, especially after a huge party.
Plastic bags and bottles can be found in almost every corner, and the garbage sorting and recycling facility is not good. There is another problematic phenomenon where more and more people like to eat wild animals, which leads to the poaching of many animal species thus endangering these animals.
As we reside on the earth, I believe we should take responsibility and change these things. Firstly, we should improve the level of awareness, reduce the use of plastic and do better at trash sorting. Simultaneously, our city should more severly punish those who excessively cut trees.
We should change our views and keep our environment clean, and maintain a healthy ecosystem in order to create a green
world. Gardening should be encouraged. Planting vegetables such as broccoli, eggplant, lettuce and so on is important for the protection of our environment.
In summary, we all have a duty to cherish nature.
Hi, I have edited your writing, and there is some coherence. You could do better, and craft sentences that more directly answer the question you were given. Please continue to practice 🙂👍
28 tháng 7 năm 2022
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