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My first class of diving
Yesterday was my first class of diving (another way to say this: My first diving class). My university provide(s) us (with) fins, snorkels and masks in the first level, but in (the) second we must buy it (ourselves).
For To practice this activity we need a medical exam, (which is) when a doctor certif(ies) that we don't have any heart or ear disease. I will go to the doctor the next week for make that.
In the first class my teacher spokes about the course's topic and later we went to the pool. The first lesson was how (to) enters into the water. There are 4 techniques basically, but he only taught us three because the last technique requires especial habilities.
The most difficult technique was "step of giant". People use it when they need to have an objective in sight without los(ing) it. This technique allows people (to) enter into the water without go(ing) down a lot.
Tomorrow I have the next class(.) I want learn a lot because I love it.Good job! You only made a few mistakes. Remember to watch out for subject-verb agreement.
0 đã biểu quyết23 tháng 4 năm 20151Something I cannot stand
I am an easy-going person who takes almost everything with a sense of humor. That is why I get on well with many people (you can also say: get along well with...), but there is a kind of people person that I really cannot stand.
The people who bothers and harasses weak people because they know they are not going to defend themselves make me sick. I have had some problems with that kind of people person (or those kinds of people) because, unfortunately, at highschools there are many like them and I cannot understand how someone can enjoy the pain of someone that who has not done anything wrong to them.
What also angers me is those people that instead of doing something, they (not really necessary to say 'they' again) just stare or even laugh when bullies do those things.
People is are not used to stopping to and thinking about how the person who is suffering from that must feel.very good! There were just a few small problems that came from confusing person/people. Just remember:
person is
people are
0 đã biểu quyết13 tháng 3 năm 20152- Meine Arbeit Ich bin eine Studentin an einer Universität und arbeite im Schreibzentrum. Was mache ich dort? Gute Frage! Ich hilfe andere Studenten mit ihrem Schreiben, und es gefällt mir sehr. Jede Sitzung, die nur 45 Minuten dauert, ist anders, also es nie langsam oder langweilig ist. Wir sprechen über fast alles: Grammatik, Organaztion, brainstormen neue Ideen (brainstorm new ideas? sagt man das?), wie man Quellen ziteriet, oder was eine 'thesis statement' ist. Ich lese was sie geschrieben haben und stelle fragen--was macht Sinn, was macht kein Sinn und so weiter. Obwohl viele Studenten im Schreibzentrum kommen, die nicht gute Schreiber sind, besuchen auch viele Studenten, die sehr gut schreiben. Oft möchten sie nur mit jemandem über ihren Ideen für Aufsätzen besprechen. Ich finde es immer sehr hilfreich mit jemandem Ideen zu besprechen. Auch kommen im Schreibzentrum viele Studenten aus anderer Länder, die ich auch gern hilfe. In die Vergangenheit habe ich andere Arbeiten (zum Beispiel als Barista im Cafe) gearbeitet. Obwohl es mir gefallen hat, finde ich (tutoring?) mehr befriedigend. Ich hilfe Studenten und sehe sie verbessern, in ein Arbeitsumfeld, das sehr locker und toll ist. könnte jemand korriegieren/lass mich wissen, wie ich verbessern kann? vielen dank!13 tháng 3 năm 201530
- Interestingly, I just had this discussion in my linguistics class. While we may be taught in school that proper English is "my friend and I," hardly anyone actually says that when talking. In conversation I wouldn't worry about it because native English speakers say "me and my friend" without thinking about it--although people will know what you mean either way you say it. In formal writing, though, I would use "My friend and I," since you're part of a compound subject and that's the right pronoun. Writing is probably the only place where people would notice or say something.0 đã biểu quyết12 tháng 3 năm 20151
Rely-依賴
I find that I am dependent on google translation [you can also say: Google translate]. I want to progress, but I have been unable to move forward. fight word Wrong words are my greatest fear, and my grammar is also unfounded poor. But I am very happy to have a new start here, and then I will try to I used to write articles in their own way. Also please guide me, thank you.
我發現我很依賴 goole 翻譯,想要進步,但是卻一直無法向前,拼單字是我最害怕的,我的文法也很沒有根據,但是我很開心在這裡有了新的開始,以後我盡量用我自己的方式寫下文章,也請大家指導我,謝謝Good job! Languages are hard to learn. With practice you can only get better. :) hope this helps!
0 đã biểu quyết25 tháng 3 năm 20140- Ziele Eines meine Freunde macht jeden Monat eine Liste der Ziele. Am ende Monat, kann sie sehen ob sie erfolgreich ist oder nicht. Ich denke, dass es eine gute Idee ist. Ich habe viele Ziele für mich. Ich habe Deutsch studieren, aber ich benutze es nicht jeden Tag. Mein Ziel für März und April ist jeden Tag mit jemandem in Deutsch sprechen. Sonst vergesse ich Wörter und Grammatik! Ja, so...das ist mein Plan.21 tháng 3 năm 201431
Warm weather
Today there is a warm weather. As a result I am waiting for the night. That doesn't mean that it is cold, but the night is better than day. The summer has finished today, but again, that doesn't means that we won't have warm days. The seasons change, on the other hand, the weather does not.
Good job! Hope this helps!
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