I wrote a speech about my thoughts on determinism. Can you guys check this for me? Or are there any suggestions I can use to improve my speech? Thanks. First, I want to explain what determinism is. Determinism denies the existence of free will and believes that personalities and actions only depend on the environment and that factors can’t be changed or altered. Next, I will explain determinism with syllogism. The major premise is “The past cannot be changed.” The minor premise is “The future will eventually be the past.” The conclusion is “The future will eventually be the past.” Our endings or futures depend on every choice we make. Biologically and psychologically speaking, the choices we make depend on our personalities. And our personalities depend on our genes and cognitions. Genes are something we can’t change. Our cognitions, however, depend on environmental factors such as family, education, culture, climate, etc. The environment we are in can be classified as one of two types. The first type is the living environment which includes all the life forms that surround us. When it comes to lives, they all make choices. This goes back to the beginning of choice, except some lives can only make choices that depend on their genes, like germs. The second type is the non-living environment. True, we can change the non-living environment. But when we change it, we make choices. This again goes back to the beginning. In conclusion, our lives are just a complicated interaction between genes and non-life forms. In other words, we can’t change our future because there is a destiny for us.

I spent the entire day working and did yoga twice today. (Good!) Actually, I could have exercise more if I hadn’t played on my phone at times. (Use "exercised" instead of "exercise") As a beginner, I couldn’t practice complex poses, so It’s easy to feel bored at this start-up phrase. (Use "can't" instead of "couldn't", and use "it's" instead of "It's) I kept telling myself to be patient and persevere, because I think yoga is the most accessible way to exercise. (Use "keep" instead of "kept". Also, there is no need to use a comma in this sentence. However, if you rearrange the syntax, then you will need to use the comma. For example: "Because I think yoga is the most accessible way to exercise, I keep telling myself to be patient and persevere." ) Unlike running and working out in the gym, which require a track, a gym, or other amenities, I can practice yoga almost anywhere and anytime if I master it at some extent. (Use "to some extent" instead of "at some extent." Also, it is better to use "yoga" instead of "I" as the subject of the main clause because you are comparing "yoga" to "running and working out in the gym." You are not comparing "I" to "running and working out in the gym." Try making the main clause passive, like this: "Unlike running and working out in the gym, which require a track, a gym, or other amenities, yoga can be practiced almost anywhere and anytime if I master it to some extent. Great narrative! Thank you!

Can you correct my mistakes, please?

This is part of a letter you receive from a British friend:
- I went to a great restaurant with my family last night. Which do you prefer: eating at home or in restaurants? Tell me about your favourite place to eat.

Hi Maria,
I am writing this letter to reply to your questions about eating out or keeping staying at home. I really love to go out to different restaurants to taste a variety of foods. I think that to eat eating at home is so boring!
What’s more, I am used to eating out with my boyfriend every weekend. Last week, we went to eat near of our home to a place at a place near our home called “Trycicle,” and we could taste a type of meat that was very delicious. Besides, this restaurant was very cheap,: we paid only 30€!
Although this restaurant is amazing, my favourite restaurant is called “The Time,” and it is in the South of Gran Canaria. This restaurant is especially of specializes in pasta, and when we went to it one month ago, we liked whole all types of pasta they cook here.
Anyway, I would like you to tell me your opinion about eating at home or in restaurants. I hope to hear from you soon!
Love,
Brenda.

Many interesting things in my life.

i want to record something interesting thing on italki꒰•̫͡•ོ꒱
yesterday,i watched a zombie movie, i had not seen it for a long time....Although the movie is humdrum...but i think the zombies or are cute as usual cute((ง ´͈౪`͈)วit's my weird hobby).
And today,it's so funny for me because my friend introduced a piece of study software to me .it's a really useful piece of software to improve lots of languages skills!
Life is so interesting꒰ ¨̮͚ ꒱♩♩◦．

很好的工作！‘Humdrum’是一个好的词语。你英很好地写。