Do these sentences sound natural? If possible, please make corrections after watching this one. https://www.youtube.com/shorts/_gpYmj1XuKo Thank you. 1) I’m so happy seeing the looks on their faces brighten the moments they see the changes in themselves, it feels as though I were the one who had experienced it. I’m also thankful to the Barbar for positively impacting their lives significantly. 2) I feel immense joy when I see the expressions on their faces light up upon noticing the transformations in themselves, almost as if I’m the one who it happened to. I am grateful to the Barbar for making a meaningful impact on their lives.